UNTITLED
Traffic pass by
I can hear the noise.
Relax, I learnt.
How? I realised.
If I had one shot,
One Oppurtunity,
I would have been done.
But where were the peace,
Where were those Smiles
Where were those DayLights,
Those Nights....
I FeLt,
I LeFt.
posted by FR@UD @ 9:27 PM
3 Comments:
But where were the peace,
Where were those Smiles
Where were those DayLights,
Those Nights....
I FeLt,
I LeFt.
These are some lines which i wonder howcome this naive had written [;)].....really good lines clearly reflecting his mood, lonelyness at home, boredome and search for something that he's thinking, he might have missed.But yaar, u are on the right path nd ll get everthing ahead, keep smiling,,,loooooolz...
The peace is not so far can't u see?
The smiles are here on our face can't u see?
The nights and those daylights are here only..
see before they really flee.....
nice pic.
The pic n the poem gel very well....but I am really curious to read the poem that is supposed to follow this one(the one u have purposely not posted!!)..... I like this one for two reasons: for a change this is no FR@UD and it's very thought provoking.......!!!
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