SMOKE
Seniors, Batchmates......
I think
They are my foes
Propel me to write,
Write mail,
Mail mails,
And get Sick.
They score more,
They hit more
Suggest more
And then...
Tease the most
Search for the Job,
Job for the summers
Upcoming.
Keep applying,
They say,
They call it Internship
The only way to go
You know, I know,
Do more and more
Keep a Bamboo in
And then...
There is Luck
If You get lucked here...
You are going to be Fucked there.
I am frustrated with this.
Can I stop?
Do I have a right to stop?
Reason,
Got Net,
Spent a lot,
Money, Time.
Not a single yes.
Yet I have to move
Further
Till Someone stops me.
Ofc, To Blame.
I have one.
Seniors, Batchmates......
I think
They are my foes
Propel me to write,
Write mail,
Mail mails,
And get Sick.
They score more,
They hit more
Suggest more
And then...
Tease the most
Search for the Job,
Job for the summers
Upcoming.
Keep applying,
They say,
They call it Internship
The only way to go
You know, I know,
Do more and more
Keep a Bamboo in
And then...
There is Luck
If You get lucked here...
You are going to be Fucked there.
I am frustrated with this.
Can I stop?
Do I have a right to stop?
Reason,
Got Net,
Spent a lot,
Money, Time.
Not a single yes.
Yet I have to move
Further
Till Someone stops me.
Ofc, To Blame.
I have one.
posted by FR@UD @ 12:33 AM
9 Comments:
MACHAU poem bhai!
"bamboo in" !! HAHA
and i am forwarding this link to all companies and universities i can
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i think this is the best by RK till date....really an awesome work by the man himself....not arbit anymore,,,,passed his points to everybody in the list,,,that RK is not going to leave just like that ....
"If You get lucked here...
You are going to be Fucked there"
that's wat makes the ART worth its name. Read this poem, and u ll beleive that real emotions can be penned down. He says that its not poem as it has no ryming, but he's really stupid if he continues to think so.....i mean that's wat makes his work ORIGINAL. So, let the world see wat u have got in ur bag,,,accept the praises nd pllzzzz plzzzz continue to write the stuff like this,,,,really reallly awesome nd wat makes it awesome, is really fast pace of the poem,,,,even paying very few words, he has the ability to enlighten the hidden truths.
Excellent going dude, just keep writing, i know u have got the balls. And the last thing is, i guess the title doesnt suits the poem,,, i mean it's not worth it given the poem,,,so try something bigger, something pomp, something which attact not repel(like smoke). I guess u r getting wat m saying, anyways that's wat i think.
See u soon, take care
I m FLATTERED
"If You get lucked here...
You are going to be Fucked there."
this was the best rythmic line .impressed by your conveying mode your frustation to reader
Awesome poem dude......one of the best literary works i have come across (by a student that is)...it beautifully shows the frustration n anger felt by a student looking for n internship.
Proud of u chap. Keep up the good work.
Beautiful. Scintillating. Awesome. Mind-Boggling. Illuminating. And finally the biggest adjective of them all for the man himself FRAUD!!!!
da reality of an iitian written in a very satirical way :) man u gotto write more!
This is definitely one of your Best.....I lurrv it ofc! Simple words, effectively compiled, great pace, makes a brilliant one like this!! Pleez keep writing! FR@UD is the way to be ;)
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